RavenWorks says... Beautiful, passionate! Glad to see some guys on the site too! ) 5:38PM Aug 18th 2006

mickyfinn says... Hard to say who's the lucky guy / girl when both of you look like the cat who's got the cream! This is a lovely memento of some tender sexy moments... and I have to say it's like real-life lovemaking, where one moment you're tearing off clothes in a frantic rush, then in the next moment time is standing still as you have a long, slow snog. The biog has you still reading "Northern Lights", but I'm assuming you've done "The Amber Spyglass" by now... if you have, I'd definitely cast you as Lyra and Will for the climax! 6:17PM Aug 17th 2006

maskedman says... Beautiful ! One gorgeous female and one veerrrry lucky guy. We're ready and waiting for chapter 2 ..and 3..and ?? 4:48PM Aug 15th 2006

Pusilika says... Of course this is only part 1 - isn't it ??? 12:29AM Aug 14th 2006

Aussie_Larrikin says... Who's a very lucky boy then ??? 7:40PM Aug 13th 2006

Tranari says... Hey, it's great to see you two doing this together. Keep up the good work! 3:17PM Aug 13th 2006

rcrahp says... Mooooooooooore Please!!! 12:23PM Aug 13th 2006